Writing A Narrative Essay

Dialogue

Dialogue is an exchange of conversation between two or more people or characters in a story. As a literary style, dialogue helps to advance the plot, reveal a character's thoughts or emotions, or shows the character's reaction within the story. Dialogue gives life to the story and supports the story's atmosphere.

 

There are two types of dialogue that can be used in an narrative essay.

 

Direct dialogue is written between inverted commas or quotes. These are the actual spoken words of a character 

 

Indirect dialogue is basically telling someone about what another person said

Dialogue is an important part of a narrative essay, However formatting dialogue can be troublesome at times.

When formatting dialogue use these rules and examples to help with your formatting:

 

Place double quotation marks at the beginning an end of spoken words. The quotations go on the outside of both the words and end-of-dialogue punctuation.

• Example:  "What is going on here?" John asked.

 

Each speaker gets a new paragraph that is indented.

• Example:

      “hi,” said John as he stretched out his hand.

           "Good Morning, how are you?" said Brad shaking John’s hand.

                     "Good. Thanks for asking," John said.

 

Each speaker’s actions are in the same paragraph as their dialogue.

              

 A dialogue tag is anything that indicates which character spoke and describes how they spoke.

 

If the tag comes before the dialogue, use a comma straight after the tag. If the dialogue is the beginning of a sentence, capitalize the first letter. End the dialogue with the appropriate punctuation (period, exclamation point, or question mark), but keep it INSIDE the quotation marks.

• Examples Before: 

James said, “I’ll never go shopping with you again!”

John said, “It's a great day to be at the beach.”

She opened the door and yelled, “Go away! Leave me alone!”

 

If the dialogue tag comes after the dialogue, Punctuation still goes INSIDE quotation marks. Unless the dialogue tag begins with a proper noun, it is not capitalized. End the dialogue tag with appropriate punctuation. Use comma after the quote unless it ends with a question mark or exclamation mark.

 

• Examples After: 

“Are you sure this is real life?” Lindsay asked.

“It’s so gloomy out,” he said.

“Are we done?” asked Brad. 

“This is not your concern!” Emma said.

 

If dialogue tag is in the middle of dialogue. A comma should be used before the dialogue tag inside the closing quotation mark; Unless the dialogue tag begins with a proper noun, it is not capitalized. A comma is used after the dialogue tag, outside of quotation marks, to reintroduce the dialogue. End the dialogue with the appropriate punctuation followed by the closing quotation marks. 

 

When it is two sentences, the first sentence will end with a punctuation mark and the second begins with a capital letter.

• Examples middle: 

“Let’s run away,” she whispered, “we wont get another chance.”

“I thought you cared.” Sandy said, hoping for an explanation. “How could you walk away?”

“I can’t believe he’s gone,” Jerry whispered. “I’ll miss him.”

 

Questions in dialogue. 

if there is a dialogue tag, the question mark will act as a comma and you will then lowercase the first word in the dialogue tag 

• Example: What are you doing?" he asked.

 

if there is simply an action after the question, the question mark acts as a period and you will then capitalize the first word in the next sentence.

• Examples:

“Sarah, why didn't you text me back?” Jane asked.

“James, why didn’t you show up?” Carol stomped her feet in anger before slamming the door behind her.

 

If the question or exclamation ends the dialogue, do not use commas to separate the dialogue from dialogue tags.

• Example: “Sarah, why didn't you text me back?” Jane asked.

 

If the sentence containing the dialogue is a question, then the        question mark goes outside of the quotation marks.

• Example:

Did the teacher say, “The Homework is due Tomorrow”?

 

If you have to quote something within the dialogue. When a character quotes someone else, use double-quotes around what your character says, then single-quotes around the speech they’re quoting.

• Example: 

"When doling out dessert, my grandmother always said, 'You may have a cookie for each hand.'"

 

Dashes & Ellipses:

Dashes (—) are used to indicate abruptly interrupted dialogue or when one character's dialogue is interrupted by another character.

Use an em dash inside the quotation marks to cut off the character mid-dialogue, usually with either (A) another character speaking or (B) an external action.

• Including the em dash at the end of the line of dialogue signifies that your character wasn't finished speaking.
• If the speaking character's action interrupts their own dialogue. 
• Use em dashes outside the quotation marks to set off a bit of action without a speech verb. 

 

Examples: 

• Heather ran towards Sarah with excitement. “You won’t believe what I found out—”
• "Is everything—" she started to ask, but a sharp look cut her off.
• "Look over there—" She snapped her mouth shut so she didn't give the secret away.
• "Look over there"—she pointed towards the shadow—"by the stairway."

 

Use ellipses (...) when a character has lost their train of thought or can't figure out what to say

• Example: “You haven’t…” he trailed off in disbelief.

 

Action Beats

Action beats show what a character is doing before, during, or after their dialogue.

• Action beats are always separated from the dialogue by periods.
  • Example:

“This isn't right.” She squinted down at her burger. “Does this look like it is well done to you?”

She smiled. “I loved the center piece you chose.”

 

If you separate two complete sentences, you will simply place the action beat as its own sentence between two sets of quotes.

• Example:

“I never said he could go to the concert.” Linda sighed and sat in her chair. “He lied to you again.”